Greeting to all of you in different languages,
In a class we are learning to fix surface feature. You maybe confused what Surface Feature are surface feature are little bits in your writing. We had to fix the punctuation, capitals and spelling. We need to use surface feature because it make it easier for people to read and understand are writing more. An example is : thissentsaChulymakessen Zbuttisrellyhrd to reed. This sentence doesn't have Surface Feature in it also doesn't use punctuation,capitals and spelling.We had to fix our writing if there were too many of the sane words that are the same.
On are Room 9 site our teacher put a link to a story we needed to fix. We made our own copy of it. Are class had to read it once and find he end of the sentence. Next we had to highlight the repeated words some of the colors I did was blue green pink yellow.
I changed up the bad man name and the child's name to make it more realistic and not to use 'he'. We had to put it in paragraph we it was a new starting of a different scene. We found the punctuation, then we turned the lower case letter to a big capital letter, after that we change some of the words that doesn't make scene at all to us.
Here Is my photo of my Surface Feature before and after .
We got 3 people up front of are class to read aloud the fixed story, there names were Rinaz, Xavier, Sean were the narrators , the main chacter and the antagonist Xavier was very very scary.
This was not our writing or our idea we just had to fix the surface feature.
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