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Thursday, 4 June 2020

The weird mirror

Kia ora readers,

Today we will be showing you what we have been doing for tearm 2 writing. This tearm  we have been learning how to write a strong narrative. A strong narrative is believable, descriptive consistent. We can describe the setting and characters.


Today we did Sick Sentences. We changed boring sentences into strong descriptive sentences.
Here is one of my boring sentences
Anna sat down
Here is my changed descriptive sentences
Anna sat down on the cold hard Uncomfortable Concrete.

Here is a 2 boring sentences
Anna touched the mirror.
here is my changed descriptive sentences
Anna slowly reached to touch the mirror .

We have also been writing a story about a girl named anna

 here is my story I am not fished yet but here is some of it


Thank you so much for coming and visting my blog.How did you like half of my story?Have a great day
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Wednesday, 3 June 2020

part 2 of the word of the week

Hello welcome back to my blog it nice to see you all hows your day going? hope it is going well .
Today I am posting another word of the week it is part 2 of the word 


              so here it is
 
So what we need to do go to the weekly side were we do are writing about the word we do for this week we did concerned but we today are doing a part 2 of concerned this time we are doing nauseated 

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