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Thursday, 4 June 2020

The weird mirror

Kia ora readers,

Today we will be showing you what we have been doing for tearm 2 writing. This tearm  we have been learning how to write a strong narrative. A strong narrative is believable, descriptive consistent. We can describe the setting and characters.


Today we did Sick Sentences. We changed boring sentences into strong descriptive sentences.
Here is one of my boring sentences
Anna sat down
Here is my changed descriptive sentences
Anna sat down on the cold hard Uncomfortable Concrete.

Here is a 2 boring sentences
Anna touched the mirror.
here is my changed descriptive sentences
Anna slowly reached to touch the mirror .

We have also been writing a story about a girl named anna

 here is my story I am not fished yet but here is some of it


Thank you so much for coming and visting my blog.How did you like half of my story?Have a great day
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