HI my name Sophie i writing a story about talking fruit hope you enjoy
We had to do it on book creator .Frist we had to write a story re-read are story make sure it make sens .Then we had to put it in pages
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
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Very well done Sophie we are all so proud of how far you have come along, keep up the fantastic work sweetheart xx dad xx
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Deletethank you dad took me quit ait love you
DeleteWell done for your story Sophie. I am glad the bullys all turned out kind. Don't forget to re-read your work to make sure you have all the spelling correct and it sounds right.
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