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Friday, 16 August 2019

Sophie summer poem

In room 8 we had to write a poem I write about summer hope you enjoy reading it




3 comments:

  1. what do you like to do in summer for real life

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    1. I like to get ice cream and go to the beach

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  2. Hi Sophie Ella here
    I like the way you described what you did.
    Next time maybe you could make it rhyme.
    I love summer to.
    What else do you do in summer
    From Ella

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