I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
What a great postcard. I absolutely love the story that you have written and the photo is so realistic! A wee tip for you is to always remember that peoples names have a capital letter. Do you think that you will go to London one day? - Miss Morgan
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hey Sophie,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great postcard. I absolutely love the story that you have written and the photo is so realistic! A wee tip for you is to always remember that peoples names have a capital letter. Do you think that you will go to London one day?
- Miss Morgan