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Thursday, 24 September 2020

Writing story fishend

 Hello amzaing reader


Today I'm posting my story it was so hard because we started with little boxs writing small stuff inside then making it better and better. Then we put it in are language feature document we fix it up and then we fix it up again.


Here are instruction we need to follow.


  • Check your punctuation. have you used it correctly?
  • Listen to your writing being read to you. How does it sound?
  • Check your paragraphs. Do they need extending?
  • Re-read your story a final time. Write down the things you have done well as a writer.
  • Post your story on your blog.

  • here is my story hope you enjoy reading it






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    Friday, 18 September 2020

    My nartive writing Part 2 story

    Kia ora reader how are you?


    Today I will be posting my narrative writing

    For narrative writing there was 6 boxs or i think more. We had to write a story are  writing  narrative story. I had 2 chacter I had myself and a witched clown we were at a abandoned cruise. We had to use are language Feature like metaphor personification dialogue and many more. 


    My metaphor was" banging and crashing"

    My Personification  was" running  around the building"

    My Hyerbols was"I was so scared I would of scared"

    my nartive story here it is


           


              I didn't get to finish my story but hope you enjoy reading it.

                      Thank you for coming feel free to leave comment and share. 

                 Have a amzaing day bye 





    Word of the week:Creative

     Kustma everybody how your day going?

    Today I am going to be posting my word of the week. This word of the week is creative we had to find a definition an example and are own sentence. It was hard because I thought what it mean but it wasn't what I thought it was.


    Here my work.


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    Friday, 11 September 2020

    Writing

     Kia ora everybody, hope your day going well. Welcome back to my blog post.

    Today I'm posting my plot Writing Graph  What is A Plot Writing Graph?.We had to use some of are language Feature that we have done for week.

    We need to go to a room 9 sit go to writing were we will see Week 8-Stories in action  then we will see what you need to do here what we have to do. We are learning about langauge feature


    YOU NEED TO:

    • Open your ‘Language Feature T3’ document and re-copy in your language feature list. Highlight each of the features on the list whenever you use one of them.
    • Make a copy of the Plot Writing Graph and save it in your writing folder. Think carefully about your story and fill in the graph boxes using bullet points.
    • Write your story by jumping into the deep end, just before the climax. This is a fabulous time to use hyperbole and dialogue.
    • Choose one part of your story that shows clearly one of the learning goals. ( Jumping into the deep end, using a language feature or using dialogue.) Post just this paragraph or part of your story explaining what you did to create it.

    Then we had to click on Plot Writing Graph then when we were on it click on file then we will find make a copy we would rename it then put it in are Writing folder. The we would chose some chacter you could chose 2 but you can't do more.Then we wring are story using some language feature like "hyperbols" "Dialogue "Metaphor" and many more.



    Here is my Plot Writing Graph.

    Have you ever made a Plot Writing Graph ?Please feel free to leave comment and share. Thank you for checking out my blog hope you have a amazing day bye :).


    Wednesday, 2 September 2020

    Indignant

     Good morning 

    Welcome to my 1st blog post in spring hope you're  having fun in spring.

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    Today I have done the word of the week and it is indignant. You maybe wondering what does indignant mean. It means you' really angry at somebody for doing the not right thing.

    Here is my work


    Thank you for coming. Enjoy the 1st day of spring bye