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Thursday, 24 September 2020

Writing story fishend

 Hello amzaing reader


Today I'm posting my story it was so hard because we started with little boxs writing small stuff inside then making it better and better. Then we put it in are language feature document we fix it up and then we fix it up again.


Here are instruction we need to follow.


  • Check your punctuation. have you used it correctly?
  • Listen to your writing being read to you. How does it sound?
  • Check your paragraphs. Do they need extending?
  • Re-read your story a final time. Write down the things you have done well as a writer.
  • Post your story on your blog.

  • here is my story hope you enjoy reading it






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